Let’s get the bad out of the way first. Hannah has obsessive
compulsive disorder, which rears its head in the wake of her impending ebook
deadline. Her parents, Tad and Loreen, are in town for an academic convention,
and sense over cocktails at a Judy Collins show that Hannah has “begun counting”
again. While Dunham carries the weight of depression effectively throughout the
episode, and while Peter Scolari and Becky Ann Baker are always welcome
additions on “Girls,” nothing can fully distract from the complete randomness
of this plot turn. Like many other aspects of “It’s Back,” Hannah’s OCD smacks
of a late-in-the-season narrative need for stakes to be raised. It’s not enough
for her to whip an entire manuscript out of thin air in under a month -- our
lead heroine needs to be compulsively counting to eight at the same time!
Balaban’s shrink is calm, organized, and succinctly admits that he’s
written a children’s book about a bionic dog -- “I think it sold 2.5 million
copies.” In other words, the placid, bespectacled man is an embodiment of everything
Hannah feels incapable of achieving. When he labels her symptoms as “classical,”
she retorts that masturbating eight times every night as a pre-teen is far from
it. This was a nice callback to Hannah’s massive fight with Marnie in Season
One, in which Marnie bellows that she would never give away Hannah’s darkest
secret -- namely, masturbating excessively to “stave off diseases of the mind
and body.”
Marnie suffers from her own hairpin-turn storyline. Ex-boyfriend Charlie has created a successful app, Forbid, which keeps the
heartbroken from calling their trigger people. After stalking Charlie at his
new multi-office entrepreneurial suite, where plenty of cute interns are
keeping him busy, Marnie returns home. Crestfallen and frustrated, Marnie
whines to Ray that the slackers of the world are conquering, while the deserving
A-types -- i.e. Marnie -- aren’t getting
to live out their dreams. This brings us to Marnie’s dream: Singing. Singing? I can see the discussion in the
writers room: “Allison Williams did that great ‘Mad Men’ video! We have to incorporate her amazing singing
voice at some point in this series.”
But now on to the good: Ray is at home because as a
33-year-old he feels uncomfortable accompanying Shoshanna to a college party. So
Shosh goes solo, with her short red dress and Beyoncé braid. When her friend
Radhika (Anjili Pal), or She of the Ironic Rollerblades, is obviously bored by
Shoshanna’s relationship gripes, Shosh skips out of the party early and --
oops! -- hooks up with the handsome doorman. This development feels organic to
me. It was only a matter of time before Ray’s self-loathing and Shoshanna’s
near-virginal sexual curiosity would irrevocably come to loggerheads.
One of the things I admire about this season of “Girls” is
its willingness to let Adam be his own person, not just a supporting character
existing in relation to Hannah. His stalker behavior from early in the season,
which quickly ran its course, was appropriately dropped and has made way for
Adam’s life without Hannah -- chopping wood, stealing dogs, and now meeting
someone who excites him. Good television lets characters grow as opposed to
keeping them tied to a rollercoaster of contrived narrative. This is something the
other half of this episode could learn from.
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2 Comments
Benchmark | March 6, 2013 10:02 PM
I think you've forgotten one key key moment that came in the Pilot. Remember when Marnie says 'I hate when Jessa turns up because when she leaves, you fall in a heap and I'm left to pick up the pieces' (Or words to that effect)... Well Jessa left and yes, Hannah has fallen to pieces... I didn't equate the 'collapse' necessarily with the e-book... I immediately thought about Jessa... I don't think this is left of field (As you mentioned yourself the masturbation argument) or a late attempt at building to a cliffhanger finale at all. It's 'Girls' everything has it's place even when it doesn't completely make sense (Jessa's Wedding?). I do agree with you about Adam, and I also think the development of Ray outside of Shoshanna is great too... Still not as awesome as Season 1, but hey I'm still watching it and I look forward to your review just as much the next day...